thegrandmagi
yeah Leon scenes are a bit lacking. descriptions of events paint vague pictures. like were Rias' Tits simply left alone? how did Rias feel around his Rod? etc. many details are missing that would have turned a lemon scene into truly something beautiful
We need description/ explanation or info from the apocalypse just like their powers were the same but in this book there were more blanks i dunno of its to make it mysterious for his prophecy but a bit more info dump for early chaps would be nice about him if it won’t spoil anything atleast . . . . . Also compared to the scenes in the previous book (L.A) ur mature scenes are less as well . . . On the bright side the side characters are getting more action umu ✌︎('ω')✌︎ <Thanks for chap btw hehe>
I personally would like more information about his power's and how they work. More lore about the island and how Leo's strength compares to other's would be good as well since he can't be the only person who can be strong. Also exploring more how much stronger his 'Anima' injections make his women would be good as well.
Excellent chapter. Now he just needs to get the younger sister to have the complete set of the succubus family. Poor guy, the expenses on underwear and pants must be huge, may they rest in peace, hahaha. As for the story I love it just like your other novel, I hope you don't abandon it and continue to brighten our days. I really like the way you write, keep it up. 😍🤩👍👌