thegrandmagi
Honestly they are both good and written well, I suppose you could make Leo more aggressive but I feel like you are heading there anyway. Honestly author just do what will make you comfortable and happy, so u aren’t disgruntled and passionless. This book has potential and I need you to finish it. Best of luck.
Wow, you guys really prefer leo to be aggressive??? Honestly, I prefer the current Leo, stay polite and chill if leo gets aggressive, this will be the same as other similar genre novels, you know, the MC's will always be looking for girl skirts... I like the novels written by this author, because Leo has never been actively looking for a harem, but this just happens and unintentionally, most of the time it's the womens in his harem who lure other womens into his harem.... that's what i like about the previous novels written by the author, and i'm pretty sure this novel will do the same thing, not leo looking for his harem, but the womens in his harem who lure other womens into his harem.... I really hope this will continue I still can't say for sure which is better this novel or lewd appocalypse... but it has great potential.. Anyway, It's the author who decides how Leo develops, so just do whatever you feel comfortable with, I'll still support it Good job author, i love you!!! Sorry for my grammar
Mr. author, you are a genius, the previous novel was the kind that I will read a few chapters from it then leave, but you were able to get me hooked up through curiosity and anticipation of the next, it was fun to read and sad to drop. In short, do what you intend to do, don't change anything unless you see it as necessary and let us enjoy your story as original as it can be.