Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Red Weasley The Strange Red Wizard

I really like the story, and if you can make it even better then I'm all for it, I'm sure most of the others who like the story feel the same, but some people don't like taking time writing comments. (Typing on a phone is a chore :[ )

i really like the story i dont care if you rewrithe the story ore not the only thing fore me is the constant zwitch up between genders him is her enz.

The only thing I didnt like was the whole thing with Pansy, but that's just because I don't like her as a character. Write it how you want it author. Fine with you continuing or a complete rewrite. I'll stick around.

in hp you go through puberty early sooo I think he's kind of like 12-13 in a sense

i personally don`t have a problem with most of the story and i think you should continue, the only thing i would change "if" you rewrite would be the pansy thing, maybe stop after 1-2 kisses the "only" reason was to seperate her from malfoy (after Malfoy says he would take crabe or goyle over her he could have stopped and be her emotional support, as her support for Malfoy was the reason to be against him), you could have switched to penelope or some other older girls, maybe older slyterhin (later?), the hermione thing was written well and i liked the rest of the story, I may not have gone for the name RED but i would in generell say keep going.

Rewriting might improve the story, but you will also lose some readers re-writing(it always happens). It's really your decision on what direction you want your story to proceed with. Alternatively, you could try to add something to the current state of your story to address the current issues(imo no story is perfect and your story could still improve considerably going forward with what you've already laid out).

I DO NOT SPEAK ENGLISH SO SORRY ANY MISTAKES BELOW! Yes, you should write the story, rewrite the story, a little appreciated from the story, it's a great concept, but you can make the MC a year longer as it lacks in interaction with the twin or making him accepted in some way, like a nephew of Molly, I remember having a brother or it was Arthur's I don't remember now, knowing her age him at the same age, I like about intimate relationships between characters that I should leave for when he was 14 years old a lot of his story, the the fact that the MC didn't avoid the death of Luna's mother gives a great development to the characters, at the beginning he also remembers the mention of digory well but it's not developed it's a good place to increase the story, his personality change also doesn't it was something subtle, that is, he went from 8 to 8, who barely spoke to a character who doesn't shut up super extroverted. Thank you for the story, your narrative is often forgotten at the age of, that this was your first year, I think you can present a very quick last story and excellent thing, about the store recommending you to modify it because very much something from the wizarding world. PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY, AS I SAID BEFORE, YOUR NARRATIVE IS HOT TO READ AND THE CONCEPT OF IT IS WONDERFUL. Thank you for attention!

If u decide to rewrite this: 1. no Susan joke pls, its cringy 2. make clone a secret(you can have so much fun if nobody knows about it)

I think if you believe you can make the story better you should, but only once.Its incredibly difficult to be completely satisfied of any body of work, especially if it's our own.Eventually you have to work with the mistakes youve made because as you learn and grow you'll inevitably recognize more of them.

Wait, so did you rewrite it?

I'm in between of going for a rewrite and not,beut if it's going to improve while keeping the blackmail of pansy, teberius, and most of the good stuff then do it. P.S don't over use teberius micro pp joke.

No

I liked his relationship with Luna but not hermione why does hermi always need to come in His personality as a child was fine that what makes him him idk maybe make Luna the same age so they can go to sch together but it’ real up to you your the author right for yourself I’m all for it

No, continue the same.

Puedes hacer la reescritura en otro libro para los que les gusta como esta lean este, aunque es doble trabajo

Si bien los capitulos del comienzo son 5/10 a 8/10 despues pese a la locura todo lo de hogwarts en adelante me parecio 10/10 fue muy entretenido aunque tal vez un time skip me hubiera hecho sentir menos culpable por ver una secularización de menores eso fue turbio, en todo caso es como te venga mejor la mano posiblemente tambien podrias seguir avanzando, terminar el año 1 o 2 y de ahi le arreglas todo de tranquis. Por favor si rehaces que tenga la capacidad de hacer un clon adulto si hace sus marranadas entonces zafa mas ahi y quien dice lo haces hacer ntr a los de sangre puro enloquece bien como lo haces xd