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Comments of chapter undefined of The Wanderer - A X-Men Crossover Fan-Fiction

BrainInSpace
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Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

You're going too fast.... I can't give you anymore stones 😭😭😭

Morgan_Sinn_2309
Morgan_Sinn_2309Lv13Morgan_Sinn_2309

Very realistic reactions, plus all the ulterior motives. Putting Elijah on the Blacklist is very sensible. Thanks for the amazing chapters. I thoroughly enjoy your work.

dasch_pool
dasch_poolLv3dasch_pool

This is as far as i go, the MC was supposed to be a wanderer, someone that chases freedom and explore the universe, this-this is just sex,sex, making out and so on, with the first couple chapters it was going the right direction but as soon as you added a female lead/romance....let's just say my disappointment was immeasurable (and this isn't a reference it's how I genuinely feel).

Clutch_Shadow
Clutch_ShadowLv14Clutch_Shadow

Author just returned from a 6 week Hiatus. Family issues. I will comment on the patreon to remind him of the Webnovel readers

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

I like this fic very much. If I could offer a small criticism: the codependency and his relationship with Jean is a way too much. I can tolerate a chapter every once in a while that is lovey dovey, but I think you’re overdoing it. I half expect him to burst into song proclaiming his love. “Oh firefly!” “Yes, my love?” “I live only for you!” “Yes, my love. Only for me!” It gets nauseating. It weighs down the fic. There are like 40 chapters or more like that. Someone should count them and tell me how much redundant schlock is like that. I’m curious. For the positives: The power progression is great. His exploration of different powers and how he goes about them is original and very engaging. I like the reactions of the characters like SHIELD. It’s realistic and helps the world building. Thanks for this story!

King_Pablo_8457
King_Pablo_8457Lv12King_Pablo_8457

I have no words to express the happiness I just felt by reading the past few chapters ( Well not so few chapters ) . So Author I can only say Thank You. 😊 🙏 😌

access11
access11Lv14access11

you should consider putting something about your patreon somewhere other than just the creators thoughts because I didn't see it and know you had a patreon until now. -TheGuyInTheKnow

DFAR
DFARLv14DFAR

author, are you alive?

OLB
OLBLv3OLB

Finally it's over. I couldn't stand flipping through a bunch of chapters containing absolutely nothing. this story really went down. sad.

John_Wolfie
John_WolfieLv1John_Wolfie

Oh. Huh. Well then. Have a good career as a Patreon only writer GoF!

Clutch_Shadow
Clutch_ShadowLv14Clutch_Shadow

For all those who don’t pay attention to patreon. Authos has been silent for almost 3 weeks. We don’t know if something is wrong with him as he hasn’t responded to comments. If you wish to read further chapter 262 is the latest chapter released on patreon. Much love author-san I hope you return

JoyousRebellion
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where are you now~~

MadWiz4rd
MadWiz4rdLv3MadWiz4rd

update?????

Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

Well, updates or i need pay Patreon for more?

GodM3loN
GodM3loNLv14GodM3loN

thanks for the chapters. How long until the next chapters are released? not to pressure just curious.

cheeki_breeki
cheeki_breekiLv13cheeki_breeki

Where are you 😭

Damilola_Ajayi
Damilola_AjayiLv1Damilola_Ajayi

Let's just pray he isn't dead. Cos that will be a bummer

Son_Gohan_6065
Son_Gohan_6065Lv2Son_Gohan_6065

Update?

Ghost_Phantom_8503
Ghost_Phantom_8503Lv4Ghost_Phantom_8503

I hope you will be continue this fanfic!!!!!!!!!!

Christopher_Skiles
Christopher_SkilesLv4Christopher_Skiles

so this is dropped?