GodOfFreedom
This is as far as i go, the MC was supposed to be a wanderer, someone that chases freedom and explore the universe, this-this is just sex,sex, making out and so on, with the first couple chapters it was going the right direction but as soon as you added a female lead/romance....let's just say my disappointment was immeasurable (and this isn't a reference it's how I genuinely feel).
I like this fic very much. If I could offer a small criticism: the codependency and his relationship with Jean is a way too much. I can tolerate a chapter every once in a while that is lovey dovey, but I think you’re overdoing it. I half expect him to burst into song proclaiming his love. “Oh firefly!” “Yes, my love?” “I live only for you!” “Yes, my love. Only for me!” It gets nauseating. It weighs down the fic. There are like 40 chapters or more like that. Someone should count them and tell me how much redundant schlock is like that. I’m curious. For the positives: The power progression is great. His exploration of different powers and how he goes about them is original and very engaging. I like the reactions of the characters like SHIELD. It’s realistic and helps the world building. Thanks for this story!