Comments of chapter undefined of MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
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Great start so far. I like that your character isn’t human. Most of these game type novels all introduce the different race option but they always choose a human protagonist making the option pointless. You should be carful when using abbreviations in the middle of sentence though, they should be reserved for the stat sheet or only used occasionally to keep from repeating words. Oh and In gaming terms ATP stands for attack points not attribute points. It’s used to calculate the players hit score and their damage dealt over time.
bruh would it kill you to use proper word like agility instead of AGT in mid sentence? it ruins the flow and overall reading experience, also it would be great if you use stats instead of ATP in sentences too...much more simple and understandable.
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