Comments of chapter undefined of Kin To Shadows

should have increased his control over shadows to the lvl of gaaras sand at least instead of buying music for 1.7k. how is music more expensive than being reborn as shikamaru

To sum up ... Pokémon in the Naruto world[img=recommend]

Disapointing ... I thought it would be an awesome fanfic about being a shadow user and stuff... but no .... Author has to put Pokemon, Blue Dragon, Dungeon, System, One Piece, in the world of Naruto.... It makes no sense and it just killed the story for me....

Bruh should have got something too facilitate his mind like increase willpower, emotional control, increase yin or shadow/darkness affinity/talent. And especially got a potential booster for chakra

The moment I saw he wanted a personal dungeon I considered dropping. Whenever a character has access to one it always seems to kill the story. They get things that make them too op one way or another. I wont immediately drop, but its on thin ice lol

the Demon Back, he's gonna get a once a fight boost to restore stamina, i once compared the demon back mode to something like being born with a genetic key to open the first 2 of the 8 inner gates of naruto so it's interesting to see what the demon back does in naruto since those 8 inner gates may or may not be related to the demon back, who knows if the author reads this please think about it and maybe respond

I think his choices could have been a lot better for low-level piks so I don't know it's your story I'm just going to continue reading

ok

Okay, first impressions after the first chapter: There are quite a few typos and mistakes, some of which I pointed out, then there is a lot of capital letters missing, from the start of sentences and from names. There are also quite a lot of spacing issues, for some reason everytime you use a comma, period or something of the like you don't use a space after it, also the math with numbers was way off... But there are some good things too, like the length of the chapter, the mc not being an Uchiha, or Naruto himself. So I'll keep reading.

Very good so far

in my school

Music was such a trash use. Music isn’t gonna stop a lunar killing him

hopefully training his body helps increase his Chakra, as I assume shikamaru has a lot of mental/yin energy and lacked physical/yang energy resulting in low Chakra reserves compared to others as Chakra is the combination of yin and yang energy, not counting the bloodline perks of some clans

3000 family 9000 life memories at age of 4 3000 system that tells mc stats and level 500 inventory slots - 100 3000 tutor 1000 one piece physique (potential) 900 hanma bloodline (+gene) 1100 shikamaru nara body 3000 Crafter system extension 2000 Dungeon in pokemon world with pokemon summening contract and pokemon items 1400 perm shadow pokemon slot Extra points - music interface Sum = 27900 1500 Shadow from blue dragon universe (probably didn't bought it?)

gracias por el capitulo

I'm hyped for this book

I feel like you should have given him a tent or affinity towards darkness or shadows.

The story is harem???

I like how smart his wishes are, their pretty week individually but together I expect him to be the strongest in the naruto verse by the 4th great ninja war, not including the okutsukis