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eatin out a prostitute? hope you enjoy the cocktail.
the story itself is fine although the world background needs work but the translation quality is just not acceptable for a paid book. if it was a free book i wouldn't complain but if i'm paying to read a book, i expect the grammar to be stellar. just consider how much you actually spend, 1$ for 4 chapters, thats about 28$ just for the currently available chapters. 25$ for 100 chapters that'll be hundreds of dollars for a subpar translation thats sometimes difficult to make sense of, and that is disregarding the actual quality of the book itself. for reference the complete harry potter book series will cost you 70$ for printed books.
so He doesn' t remember the Location of the rr at all but he remembers the pass Code for the map?
i don't actiually agree with that. while Dancing isn't necessary, IT does elevate the Performance to the next lvl. Bieber, Chris Brown, Usher,mj. were all good singers but what Made Them stand out was their Dancing. acting is a good Skill to have for any Person in Front of the camera. at the very least it will be helpfull for His own Mvs.
i understand. from my point of view no matter what, if you write a story going for 600-1000+ chapters you will never avoid repetitivness. my first xianxia was panlong and because i was new to the genre i finished it, the first and last xianxia i would ever finish because even though i love the concept of cultivation the repetitvness didn't escape my notice starting from the second novel,regardless of expanded activities like alchemy, talisman making or array making etc.. while you might expand his activities to acting, directing, corporate managment and what not, the essence of the story, of aweing the masses and watching the reactions still remains the same no matter what. so the repetitivness will still set in. so a music focused story with 300 chapters and then a spin off, movie focused, or smth. i would actually prefer, although that might just be a matter of taste. the most important part of writing a story is to know when to end it.
i don't Like where this Story ist heading. this jack of all Trades kinda Thing ist seriously Off Putting. i expected a Story about a Dude with a music system, doing music. but he Just does everything Like there weren't Just 24 hours in a day. programming, Game development, acting, drawing, scriptwriting, im assuming directing as Well and we haven't even reached chapter 100 yet. where is this gonna end? a more focused Story is what i' d prefer. many of similar Stories do this and music Always gets pushed to the Sideline. let me guess is CEO of his own company next.
cool, but its still just a transformation that he needs to activate by pressing a button, nothing prevents him from being killed without warning before he can turn into a devil an angel or whatever nephilim you mentioned. not to mention the limit on his lifesan as a human will very quickly become an issue, his skills both as devil and angel will need to be trained as they surely don't come natural to him afterall he is merely transforming into one of their kind he will not have the same intuitive skill
you think any chump can just recreate the evil piece or brave saint system? the reason i say its useless is because sure he can take advantage of their weakness but its not like thats anything new. the angels and devils have faught one another for millenia, at first their might be an element of surprise by it but once his sacred gear is known its the same old stuff.
seems boring and bland i also don't quite understand the use of his sacred gear. angel/devil he can turn into an angel or devil for a limited time(5min). in a world of only humans and maybe yokai, that might be an interesting concept but in dxd it just seems so utterly useless, i just don't see the point, there are ways to become a devil or an angel already, so why?
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jack of all can't become a master because he lacks time, being an immortal, i doubt he faces the same issues.
there was a sword dude.
dude.
why would you ask for your lawyer in a bank?