its ok, the story is actually quite nice but the amount of useless conversation between irrelevant people is staggering, im talking about those chat logs from people outside the dungeon. sometimes more than half the chapter is them discussing what they just saw rifan do, its just too damn much as it literally adds nothing to the story. the privacy setting is also bad, only when you are almost naked does the transmission stop? what is that, you should at least be able to set up private spaces alongside that, for example your bedroom should be one or the entire ship if the user wanted too not just when asleep or taking a dump. then there is the fact that there seem to be no rewards for a certain amount of views or maybe its calculated daily so rifan didn't get any rewards for that yet. i guess we'll see.

the gaunts were dirt poor, wahtever was left riddle definately emptied

yeah but its quite difficult to learn and takes years to master, so not bad at all.

all of the secrets he has, don't really matter even if found out. but if he is cought with his own illegal organisation, then he might as well pack up and flee the village. all this risk for no tangible benefit.

i mean he wants to become a devil so getting killed is prbably the fastest way.

yes. in canada you can get a learners permit and depending on the province a full license at about 17

prologue is too damn long. 10 chapters in and still no awakening. get to it already. we even had a prologue for the prologue, No wonder i started skipping chapters. If this is an Idea of this Stories pacing then don't bother Reading until 100 chapters are released.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/naruto-my-hunting-system_25585043405325805

no, he is correct. now is the summer before his 1st year. 1 year later is the summer before his 2nd year in school. 2 years later from now will be summer before his 3rd year, 3 years later will be summer before his 4th year and 4 years later will be the summer before his 5th year.

thanks its that annoying auto correct

meh. If he is tired of living he can Always Off himself. He will be Angeles Not Immortal.

i think you are thinking of a different version of this story. the one i'm talking about has him release the 8 tails in kumo, capture yugito nii, remove the nibi without killing her. then he moved the nibi into his huntig ground killed her got her power and when she reformed made a deal with her to act as a kind of guardian for the senju clan without being sealed. yugito is living with the senju clan now.

the synopsis alone made me feel sick to my stomach. seems like a face slapping novel and i'd guess its a chinese translation.

didn't read too much of it but the moment he started skin refinement, i was done with this story. im really not interested in yet another unending cultivation novel.otherwise it seemed fine, if you are yet to become sick of the cultivation genre, you might enjoy it. i prefer how its done in " Naruto: My hunting system" no cultivation nonsense, just a strength increment to kage level and beyond.

i mean.... it was good while it lasted.

i dont mind IT. they have spent months together, developing a crush On HIM IS Not that weird. afterall blushing IS Just away for authors to symbolize romantic affection.

This Story seems interesting enough, with quite a bit of potential. The bad grammar completely destroys the reading experience though.

why would he need an excuse for learning it? since its in the library, he'ss free to learn it.

i mean great? but not really the point of this training.

what for? for an s-rank mission he'd probably earn millions. selling fuuinjutsu will also easily make him rich, all he has sold till now is the most basic storage scroll and he made easily 500k to a million with it. talented shinobi need a lot of things but unless he's got a gambling problem money won't be one.