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Roktah

Roktah

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  • Roktah
    Roktah6h
    Replied to NunuXD

    i understand. from my point of view no matter what, if you write a story going for 600-1000+ chapters you will never avoid repetitivness. my first xianxia was panlong and because i was new to the genre i finished it, the first and last xianxia i would ever finish because even though i love the concept of cultivation the repetitvness didn't escape my notice starting from the second novel,regardless of expanded activities like alchemy, talisman making or array making etc.. while you might expand his activities to acting, directing, corporate managment and what not, the essence of the story, of aweing the masses and watching the reactions still remains the same no matter what. so the repetitivness will still set in. so a music focused story with 300 chapters and then a spin off, movie focused, or smth. i would actually prefer, although that might just be a matter of taste. the most important part of writing a story is to know when to end it.

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    Gamer Superstar
    Fantasy · NunuXD
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  • Roktah
    Roktah20h
    Posted

    i don't Like where this Story ist heading. this jack of all Trades kinda Thing ist seriously Off Putting. i expected a Story about a Dude with a music system, doing music. but he Just does everything Like there weren't Just 24 hours in a day. programming, Game development, acting, drawing, scriptwriting, im assuming directing as Well and we haven't even reached chapter 100 yet. where is this gonna end? a more focused Story is what i' d prefer. many of similar Stories do this and music Always gets pushed to the Sideline. let me guess is CEO of his own company next.

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    Gamer Superstar
    Fantasy · NunuXD
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  • Roktah
    Roktah16d
    Commented

    Here comes snapes talent

    Ch 66 Chapter 66 Shopping, Thoughts, and Frustration_1
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    Becoming a Wizard by Starting From the Mind Closure Technique
    Fantasy · Bodhisattva Hammer
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  • Roktah
    Roktah1mth
    Replied to Roktah

    wait He Said ITS a Translation? this ist definately a Story on ff so someone ist lying either this author or the one one ff

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    Fairy Tail: Supreme Hentai Harem
    Anime & Comics · EroLord
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  • Roktah
    Roktah1mth
    Posted

    Dante's Harem by EroticaAuthor69xxx on fanfiction. straight Up Just changed MCs Name from Dante to Darwin. he did mention this ist an edited Story but he could at least give Credit to the og. Not Sure If ITS a straight Copy with Name Change, i am too lazy to Check maybe someone else can verify IT.

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    Fairy Tail: Supreme Hentai Harem
    Anime & Comics · EroLord
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  • Roktah
    Roktah1mth
    Replied to Hentai_Senchou

    cool, but its still just a transformation that he needs to activate by pressing a button, nothing prevents him from being killed without warning before he can turn into a devil an angel or whatever nephilim you mentioned. not to mention the limit on his lifesan as a human will very quickly become an issue, his skills both as devil and angel will need to be trained as they surely don't come natural to him afterall he is merely transforming into one of their kind he will not have the same intuitive skill

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    Highschool dxd : Yasaka is my wife
    Anime & Comics · The_Creator223
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  • Roktah
    Roktah1mth
    Replied to Hentai_Senchou

    you think any chump can just recreate the evil piece or brave saint system? the reason i say its useless is because sure he can take advantage of their weakness but its not like thats anything new. the angels and devils have faught one another for millenia, at first their might be an element of surprise by it but once his sacred gear is known its the same old stuff.

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    Highschool dxd : Yasaka is my wife
    Anime & Comics · The_Creator223
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  • Roktah
    Roktah1mth
    Posted

    seems boring and bland i also don't quite understand the use of his sacred gear. angel/devil he can turn into an angel or devil for a limited time(5min). in a world of only humans and maybe yokai, that might be an interesting concept but in dxd it just seems so utterly useless, i just don't see the point, there are ways to become a devil or an angel already, so why?

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    Highschool dxd : Yasaka is my wife
    Anime & Comics · The_Creator223
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  • Roktah
    Roktah1mth
    Commented

    are you kidding me? did i just pay for this

    Ch 111 Shelf Speech_1
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    Longevity Clan Starts with the Patriarch's Marriage
    Eastern · Ride the wind while it's weak
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  • Roktah
    Roktah1mth
    Commented

    9.11 m

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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let me laugh
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  • Roktah
    Roktah1mth
    Replied to Infinite_Shadow_57

    jack of all can't become a master because he lacks time, being an immortal, i doubt he faces the same issues.

    Chuckling, the Source said, "Divine adaptability and the gift of jack-of-all-trades. You have received powerful allies indeed. Now go - your new life awaits beyond the veil!"
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    Reborn As Hades (DxD)
    Anime & Comics · illyisabot
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  • Roktah
    Roktah1mth
    Commented

    there was a sword dude.

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    One Piece: Hunter God
    Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing
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  • Roktah
    Roktah1mth
    Commented

    dude.

    The goblin smirked and said that his name was Hookwolf and he was the Potter family's attorney.
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    Potter's luck
    Book&Literature · FanFictionForge
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    Roktah1mth
    Commented

    why would you ask for your lawyer in a bank?

    Harry and Morgana went inside the building. As they approached the nearest goblin, they asked him where they could find the Potter family's solicitor.
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    Potter's luck
    Book&Literature · FanFictionForge
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  • Roktah
    Roktah2mth
    Commented

    at first i thought it was just a typo but you do know its Canis Lycaon right? not lyacon. its derived from canis lupus lycaon, the timberwolf.

    "You are forgetting the Sephiroth Graal. The Dhampir girl is my Bishop. Since you are family I am letting you know. Very soon I will be getting another Longinus in my Peerage. Canis Lyacon." 
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    The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • Roktah
    Roktah2mth
    Commented

    nothing surprising about the stages, what is an issue is the fact that the names of these stages change every chapter.

    Some readers have mentioned they find the martial arts realms and demon ranks a bit confusing, so I'll take this chapter to explain the martial arts realms and demon ranks that are known thus far in the text.
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    Demon Slaying, Gaining 60 Years of Cultivation From the Start
    Eastern · Flower On The Water That Reflects Moon
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  • Roktah
    Roktah2mth
    Commented

    Lucy paid 70k rent though. are you rure about that?

    With 50J approximating to 30,000 RMB, it's quite the lucrative venture, especially for a mage.
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    Fairy Tail : The Strongest Creature
    Anime & Comics · Ani_Scout
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  • Roktah
    Roktah3mth
    Replied to Severos

    he got stronger when he got his tattoos too.

    < Strength : 2,750
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    First Demonic Dragon
    Fantasy · AnathaShesha
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    Roktah4mth
    Replied to Potatowned

    it takes 10-12 years to naturally awaken because of the low mana concentaration in the air. the rich and powerfull all use training rooms to speed up the process of advancing combined with him only training a few hours a day its reasonable. we also dont know if mythical talent is about speed, it could also mean that his mana is more condensed or just more quantity wise.

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    Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
    Fantasy · RealmWeaver
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  • Roktah
    Roktah5mth
    Posted

    horrible mtl, don't waste your time until it's readable.

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    Hogwarts : I Have the Holy Father System
    Book&Literature · One_For_None
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