Whiteday
First I want to say that I enjoyed this novel up to this point so far and I think it has potential to be pretty good. But there are two big things that are holding it back. The first being that there was little interaction between the MC and his female companions. They just seem to be background characters as far as development goes. The other big thing is that there are already a few fluff chapters. I don’t want to read a full chapter of the antagonists bashing on the MC while he just walks up to a boss. While I’m not against a little MC bashing just please don’t make it the whole chapter. Nothing really happened in that chapter and it was annoying to read. If both of these things could be addressed the novel would be an enjoyable read.