Enigma014
writing style to be revise, if you use 1st pov, all time it hard and you have to give more effort and grammatical error is also to be revise, it just my opinion you are not to take seriously if you want
this doesn't looks like it will become a harem. I hope it won't change
is MC's soon-to-be wife unable to speak
for some reason I felt like I have read this type story before
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Author should work on his grammar its painful to read it
grammar grammar
