Ssocorth32500
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Ssocorth325001yrCommenteddiscussion should change to image and famouse to infamous
Because Harrison felt that Roy felt very lonely. So that's why Harrison sent proposals to many nobles to have Roy's engagement with their girls, but Roy's discussions were so famous that no one wanted to have his girl's relationship with Roy.- Ssocorth325001yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
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should change it to "he sees people as beneath him"
Discussions of Roy's behavior were so far away that he did not even like to look at the person below him. And he does not understand anyone in his equal. - Ssocorth325001yrCommented
"your right arent you" to "your not insane aren't you" or your sane aren't you
Everything was perfect because of the plotline in the game, but when it really started happening, it was not right. No matter where you look from, the marriage of a fifteen-year-old child. You are right, aren't you? - Ssocorth325001yrCommented
"just so i dont get into any new trouble
'Just I don't get into any new trouble.' - Ssocorth325001yrCommented
"prince would fade" should use "a prince would pale in comparison"
As I was going towards the room window, my eyes went towards a mirror lying in the room. A fifteen-year-old black-haired man, who had red eyes and his face so that even a prince could fade, was visible in the mirror. - Ssocorth325001yrCommented
you have to beat your heart to get up whats with this grammar
My eyes were getting heavy. Really getting up in the morning is not easy; you have to beat your heart to get up. - Ssocorth325001yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
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What Time is it
'What is the time?' - Ssocorth325001yrCommented
reminds of tazerface
I wanted a name that made my enemies tremble in fear, something like 'Razorface' or something. - Ssocorth325001yrCommented
you sure this is okay you will be accused of copying
" Amanda Lionheart. From 2-A." - Ssocorth325001yrCommented
Amanda well color me surprise
" Amanda Lionheart. From 2-A." - Ssocorth325001yrCommented
should change to might makes right
After the apocalypse, strength makes right. Though there were many rules and regulations enforcing equality amongst people, everyone knew that it was just a façade. In today's society the stronger ones were given higher privileges. It cannot be denied. - Ssocorth325001yrCommented
wait what psyons
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