I have a question does the wording, grammar, character personalities/quirks ever get fixed to at least a standard level of English for pre-teens? it feels like I'm reading some Year 2/3 level work.
Yo guys kinda long chapter, today's image is Edgar Revy (unfortunately I couldn't find an uglier male with fox characteristics XD but he is more on the animal side unlike Liz, Elaine or Erin)
I'm really liking the story so far. My only issue is that when the characters are thinking these " " are used, which makes it confusing because you're using them for talking as well. It would be better if you used ' ' for thinking instead.