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Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System

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LadyAstreaus
LadyAstreausLv3LadyAstreaus

I have a question does the wording, grammar, character personalities/quirks ever get fixed to at least a standard level of English for pre-teens? it feels like I'm reading some Year 2/3 level work.

Barion_Trident
Barion_TridentAuthorBarion_Trident

Yo guys kinda long chapter, today's image is Edgar Revy (unfortunately I couldn't find an uglier male with fox characteristics XD but he is more on the animal side unlike Liz, Elaine or Erin)

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ArtaN96
ArtaN96Lv15ArtaN96

Aura is already the best waifu for me ❤️ Loli baba is life

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Robert_C_7044
Robert_C_7044Lv15Robert_C_7044

Really good foundation. And story. Gg author

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darkimortal
darkimortalLv6darkimortal

I'm really liking the story so far. My only issue is that when the characters are thinking these " " are used, which makes it confusing because you're using them for talking as well. It would be better if you used ' ' for thinking instead.

Uncertainty
UncertaintyLv4Uncertainty

Ϯ♅ᕱภКᏕ ꊰԾᏒ Ϯ♅ꂅ ꒝♅ᕱᎵϮꂅᏒ

Alan_Garcia_3344
Alan_Garcia_3344Lv2Alan_Garcia_3344

Uhhh nice chap, I wonder where is Aura though ?