Comments of chapter undefined of Strongest Mage with the Lust system
Strongest Mage with the Lust system
Blizzard54k
Chapter comments11
the idea is good, the story has great potential, I'm very interested, but I kind of dislike the mc's personality (and this is the core of the story), an example is that the mc lacks ambition (I'm not talking about making plans for become king, or become the strongest man in the world,...), I'm talking about at least common situations for anyone in his situation, for example, he's not interested in the system, he's not interested in being someone better , not interested in growing a mage at least above average (asks a thing or two about mage, as a curiosity and not as if he wanted to do something to become a mage). he simply goes through every situation, passive in every action, in a world where everything is defined by force (it's the beginning of the story to have meaningful action, but even his thoughts are passive in action). whether in an environment like this (even more in this case) or in real life, hoping that the world will be something good and better, in which all people are good, trusting the strength of others (father and sister) that is, that all this is something good, it's pure idiocy. but it seems like he cares about anything else even insignificant, and only when there is nothing else would he care about being active in something critical/really important. I'm not criticizing you author, but the mc needs more assertive/active. If you could be so kind as to say that, he would change in the next 10 chapters, I would appreciate it.
