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Comments of chapter undefined of Transmigrated to The Walking Dead With a Golden Finger.

Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5Hollysummoapocaly

Ooh, good start. Will you be able to steal Shein's sexual prowess, stamina, increased muscle mass, muscle density that some people genetically possess? And medical knowledge is essential.

Mr_Me0w
Mr_Me0wLv12Mr_Me0w

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

I like the story so far, but try not to make it so Rick centric, this is a story about your character and not Rick. There was little to no reason to be in exactly as long a coma as him or anything. Nor to write the hospital scene with Rick as the main see from the moment he wakes up and shakes you awake untill the door with the zombie clawing through its gap. So do consider this for future chapters. That your character is the mc of your story and not Rick.

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

The voice in the head thing is a big no for me, the scenes are incomplete and so far it seems that there are 2 protagonists which should not be so, the story is about your MC not Rick. You really need more details and not just saying "MC did this, MC did that" is primitive to say the least.

OukisLips
OukisLipsLv15OukisLips

Nice, thanks for the chapter! Though I (and many other readers I'm sure) really dislike sentient systems. I know it's your story but it doesn't really seem like the sentience of the AI will contribute anything in the long term..

A11StarReader
A11StarReaderLv14A11StarReader

More plz

Max_Erikson
Max_EriksonLv14Max_Erikson

More please

Andrew_Alsbrooks
Andrew_AlsbrooksLv14Andrew_Alsbrooks

it's good keep it goin

Coco2
Coco2Lv4Coco2

nice first chapter

DaoistF0koDD
DaoistF0koDDLv2DaoistF0koDD

Gracias por el capitulo

C_M_97
C_M_97Lv1C_M_97

Não gostei dessa coisa do Z na cabeça dele. Não entendi porque ele teve que ficar em coma com o Rick, ele não levou um tiro no ombro?

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

I don’t like the way your stats are formulated. Why not keep it more universal so most of your readers will understand and enjoy it? Stick with the simple Strength, endurance, etc. This mind, body, soul nonsense sucks. However, I do like the copy/paste skill. Pretty cool.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEYLv13WHAT_NO_MONEY

some of the sentwnce structure and grammar is janky