Spudz_Gaming
Ooh, good start. Will you be able to steal Shein's sexual prowess, stamina, increased muscle mass, muscle density that some people genetically possess? And medical knowledge is essential.
I like the story so far, but try not to make it so Rick centric, this is a story about your character and not Rick. There was little to no reason to be in exactly as long a coma as him or anything. Nor to write the hospital scene with Rick as the main see from the moment he wakes up and shakes you awake untill the door with the zombie clawing through its gap. So do consider this for future chapters. That your character is the mc of your story and not Rick.