Comments of chapter undefined of Somnus's Descent (For Re-Publishing Under Sharestory.io)

Thanks for the chapter

Found many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors but they do not disturb my experience.

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love the grammar

Great grammar!

There's a lot of info in this first chapter that I'm still consuming but I am enjoying the read so far. The protagonist, in particular, is someone I want to root for. Let's see how it goes in the next chapters.

Cool beginning!