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Comments of chapter undefined of Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel

Jose_matos
Jose_matosLv3Jose_matos

I wont say this fanfic is perfect because it has some problems the main one being grammar, the story needs an editor to correct all the mistakes because there are a lot of them and the problem its recurring. Other than that i cant complain the story is good and unique with good comedy and i hope that any hater comments don’t make you drop it. People will complain but its your story and i like all of it.

Ashlin_17
Ashlin_17Lv12Ashlin_17

2 chapters at once. We're blessed .

TehStorm
TehStormLv4TehStorm

Awesome chapter! Loved the One Piece adventure! But ngl, i'm glad we are back on Marvel! Can't wait to see Hector interacting with the Marvel universe again!

Feruru
FeruruLv4Feruru

TFTC bro. Took 3 hours to read this. 28k indeed. Soul-soul fruit is very OP in Hector's hands. Creating mystical creatures at will, I like that. Hector can create his own Garden of Eden. Marvel World doesn't know what will hit them next 🤣

DiaRaim
DiaRaimLv1DiaRaim

To level up Intelligence, MCs could drop Geniuses from “Phineas and Ferb”: Doofenshmertz essentially lost because of the Self-Destruct Button, and Phineas and Ferb’s Intelligence was recognized even by Iron Man in the Crossover 🤔

Jack_Rybka
Jack_RybkaLv4Jack_Rybka

Tftc. Love how Hector matured every chapter, you can see his progress and don't just read about some robot with 3 basic emotion

Post_Nut_Clarity
Post_Nut_ClarityLv4Post_Nut_Clarity

I thank god this one piece arc is over it was boring for me( nothing against the author just I’m not a one piece fan)

Aria_Ruinz
Aria_RuinzLv4Aria_Ruinz

Want a strawhat and the brat

JONTY_
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Demon_King22
Demon_King22Lv3Demon_King22

2 chapters Top!

Leo_Ferreira_3606
Leo_Ferreira_3606Lv1Leo_Ferreira_3606

These were wonderful chapters author, Hector did many things in One Piece, He evolved as a character, increased his powers, made new allies, killed all the villains in One Piece, and got married and had two children. without a doubt it was a looooong trip, Shego without a doubt won't be very pleased with the news, especially since she wasn't the one who got married and had children with Hector first. It will also be interesting to see the stance that Hector will take at Marvel after these experiences, especially with characters like MJ and Black Cat, as he should now be much more open to the idea of ​​investing in a relationship with them. Anyway, the Marvel Universe must prepare itself, because now they have a more mature and even more powerful Eidolon, I'm already eagerly awaiting the next chapter and I'm excited for Hector's future adventures. see you soon.

SnorlaxLord
SnorlaxLordLv4SnorlaxLord

I found it a little forced with Yamato But who am I in the bread line?

Trek
TrekLv6Trek

The one peice arc was pretty good, although mc made a really bad choice of abandoning his kids overall it was a good arc.

Anonny_Anonymous
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Good chapters. The relationships seem very shallow, inorganic, and forced. It’s the only thing I don’t like about this story. Especially having a kid. Other than that, I love the story.

The_Spartan_
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Short part about Hector’s kid in MHA inheriting the mark and the reactions from the people

Okhwang725
Okhwang725Lv3Okhwang725

very good arc of one piece but author you forgot about UTA

Luke_Devilux
Luke_DeviluxLv4Luke_Devilux

Thanks for the 2 amazing Chapters... I think it's a great ending for the arc, can't wait for future development.

Fabio_Mecca
Fabio_MeccaLv4Fabio_Mecca

Maybe for his next summon it can be someone from the same universe of helena, maybe even harley. It will create a cool situation.

matheus_alves
matheus_alvesLv2matheus_alves

You know, I don't know who's going to read this, but what anime exist in the Marvel universe, like Star Wars, what else, One Piece? imagine eidolon saying something about this universe and kitte being like "you went to one piece!?" Not to mention the wedding which he definitely won't talk about but it would be funny, and I totally knew about Shego's reaction lol

Samoel_Santos
Samoel_SantosLv3Samoel_Santos

Baby 5 became a summon... so where's the Smiley he got in Punk Hazard?

Luizz_Ricardo
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author you are so incredible that I don't even know how to praise you