EclypseX
I'm really having a hard time not killing myself with these "human interactions" i'm aware author will probably ignore this but the interactions are based on anime worlds hence they act like anime characters thus their reactions are very predictable and almost practiced because of how mannerisms in japan reflect to their family society etc hence the exaggarated movements and noises it's just i'm having a really hard time being comfortable with the interactions personalities long drawn out emotional inflictions on faces being shown such as frowning laughing all the oya oya and all the ara ara i mean you could put it as a joke but this feels like socially inept children socially trying to interact and it's painful
Thank you for letting me know what you think about it xD This chapter was written when I hadn't even released the first chapter into webnovel and when I was on a writer's high, writing everything that comes to mind. But don't worry, I have put all of the concerns and suggestions I've received after the publishing of the story and have adjusted the flow, pace, and writing of my story to be better enjoyed by everyone :D