Comments of chapter undefined of Villain's Rising

Ouch. This is painful. After the protagonist matures...I hope he becomes a true villain. We shall wait and see.

Is it gonna follow those stories where once he gets over her she comes running back? cause i cba with that, if he gets over her even if she comes back he shud not even look in her direction anymore. Also is this gonna have a harem?

I like the name you chose, Night Crawler. It's intriguing, reminds me of a friend of mine.

Who's here from I will Kill the Author?

Thanks for the chapter. No offense, but the writing feels "immature" (I'm not sure if it is the best fitting word, it gives me the feeling of a teen not used to detach themself from what they write). I hope to not have been offensive, it is obvious that none starts perfect. Experience is needed to improve oneself and one's own work. I'm sure that your newer chapters are already better. I just wanted to tell you to consider an eventual rewrite of the early chapters because to me it feels a bit off. Keep the good work and don't let any comment (mine included) upset you.

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well here i am ..... got to know who tf is sam .. came from i will kill the author

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I really like this chapter; I'm going to follow this novel

so another simp haa