Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn as Leonard Lannister in ASOIAF

Transhumanist:I can accept that you accomplished what you wanted to in the nightmare part. It really gave that ambiance to me. But it was hard to read, and totally unnecessary if you wanted us to know he had a inauspicious nightmare. As for the exposition of plot in the Daenerys example, it would have been better if you made the whole Daenerys thing a mystery to be used to surprise us when we eventually see what you did, instead of hinting that you will be keeping her alive and in possession of her dragons and by doing so force us try to make sense of what we read, all the while thinking that the MC was doing an illogical thing. That kind of thing makes me lose immersion when a jarring plot hole seems to be on the way. I can accept that such a plot hole would make perfect sense if we just knew what you will eventually show us (if you successfully create the plot you were going for) , but in the mean time between the start and conclusion of that plotline we would be thinking "the author goofed here".