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Then again, it could be a good idea to put it as being part of the dialogue. Idk
It’s actually in his thought, not aloud. But I understand the misunderstanding. I should stick with the 3rd person when Mc thinks of someone...
The legendary Bobby B in armor
House Royce
House Beesbury
House Lannister
House Hightower
House Baratheon
The overall view of that place
I see, I see… Well, after the 36th chap, there will be votes. The possibility of me correcting all of my mistakes since chap 1, upgrade flop passages + erasing spelling mistakes directly in the future. It may be necessary in a certain regard, but I will leave the choice to it. Along with other votes.
No problem, I understand. For the nightmare, it was made to be exagerated. This is not how someone burns, of course. Yet, are all nightmare logical ? I don’t think so. It portrays your current fears and all… As for Daenerys, yes I understand that you could feel that way. I just didn’t want to repeat myself too much since it will be said again in details when the time comes. The thing is, for several plans, I don’t want the readers to already know what is going to happen. I want you to gradualy discover things, not everything at the same time and knowing from the start. What do you think about my opinion ? (I’m curious to know, really)
Glass candle
Inside the Citadel
Oldtown
The Hightower
Glad to have a new fellow reader onboard, then 😉 Not really, I write when I have the time to do so and I barely have any words limit. I just don’t like to go below 2k words, and 20k is too much as well. But in average, between 5 days and two weeks pass for each release. There has been faster, as well as slower. Depends on life, you know. The next chapter is fully organized, I just need to find the good words and it’s out (so at the very end of this week, if things go as planned)