Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn as Leonard Lannister in ASOIAF

Transhumanist:Bro I don't know how it happened but I wrote that comment about the following chapter. Not this one. Maybe I pushed a wrong key and opened the wrong chapter but chapter 32 was awesome as usual. It was chapter 33 I disliked. Especially the beginning of the chapter, some parts seem to be written just because it looks good but don't make much sense. The whole nightmare was not to your usual standards. I sometimes felt that Leonards inner monologue seemed like he was very aware that he was being spied on and so he tried to talk(think) like an edgy teen to wow the ladies. I also think in iffy subjects like "How important Daenerys is for the well being of Lannister family? " you should show us the thought process of Leonard. If we are being shown his inner voice that long it shouldn't read that much like he is dictating his thoughts after being filtered and made user friendly. Sometimes it makes us get more immersed in a story when we can see why the MC did what he did etc.