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Comments of chapter undefined of My Hollywood System

King_Frost
King_FrostLv12King_Frost

I was hype for the meeting but instead we get June.. I think this is one of the problem with this story. It feels like the Author put emphasise on the wrong things. Don't get me wrong, I love the story but its going downhill for a while now.

Rudranarayan_Nanda
Rudranarayan_NandaLv3Rudranarayan_Nanda

Why don't author just kill june in a accident if he don't want to develop her character.

WellHiddenMyth
WellHiddenMythLv14WellHiddenMyth

what happened to your story man? i always looked forward to the new chapters but now they are either full of fillers or nothing like this one. it seem like you are trying to drag to increase the number of chapters for no reason. i did not want to comment negatively like this but this is because i absolutely like this story. it is actually one of the reasons as to why i downloaded the app agian and started to read these story after a long time.

lazyleo
lazyleoLv7lazyleo

Thanks for the chapter. Bruh, what happened to the talk between them? You can't just skip it like that.

Iseeyou
IseeyouLv15Iseeyou

What a disappointing chapter.

LordValmar
LordValmarLv4LordValmar

So are we not going to get clarification of what was actually discussed in the previous chapter? Like why the guy said they were in breach of contract or whatever?

Morald
MoraldLv13Morald

i must say this is really disappointing

_Bruh
_BruhLv12_Bruh

what happened to the talks? i was trynna see colt get destroyed with Facts and Logic

Romdez
RomdezLv6Romdez

This is probably the first time I’ve ever been so disinterested in a female lead. Like I’m not one to usually hate but yeah I’ve been skipping the parts with her consistently and it’s crazy

Daoisttyy
DaoisttyyLv5Daoisttyy

has this story gotten worse...like no joke it's not the same anymore

FeaR_Less
FeaR_LessLv4FeaR_Less

I just skipped June part lol😀

whatissunkanmi
whatissunkanmiLv3whatissunkanmi

The June experiment is dead. What's even sadder is you thought using a cliffhanger in the previous chapter was an acceptable way to drag people into her world. All while throwing all suspense out the way with how you ended the chapter. So, even if you portray the meeting in the previous chapter everyone already aware of its final conclusion. Learning what the contract breach is inconsequential at this point. Don't know I'm bothering apparently you don't read comments and are a bit of a double downer. Arigatou, I won't be here to see another novel implode.

UnjayV
UnjayVLv1UnjayV

Bro I wanted Will vs Colt not June you should had focus on that

Sorrest_
Sorrest_Lv14Sorrest_

This story is just a disappointment man. What happened?

Max829827
Max829827Lv4Max829827

Yeet june

pickario77
pickario77Lv13pickario77

bro what's wrong with you like your writing is not adding up.

streiz
streizLv13streiz

I just skip whenever June appears.

Warsage
WarsageLv4Warsage

is this a joke, you left us on a cliffhanger and didn't bother to carry on you just skipped the payoff.

NealCaffrey
NealCaffreyLv2NealCaffrey

this chapter was disappointing

Neo_Infinity
Neo_InfinityLv13Neo_Infinity

I hope you explain this on next chapter and June needs some serious work as character.

DevionKing
DevionKingLv4DevionKing