I don't like most of system who give gifts like come on Superman still needs gift???he just have to work hard when he unlock some powerful Superman abilities he can literally kill thanos

Come on bro just make him first in the class. think from the view point of mc he got 7th place in class of kids of age 11.He is a mature adult bro. And what kind of logic is this that i know the answer but i won't write it.

Ohh shut up will you

He should be first in his class. Why don't he gives much attention to magic theory?? That's the thing needed to develop magic or make your own magic. Will he just practice existing magic became strong then became an auror Or something after graduation?? Nothing new

Everything is good except romantic relationship of mc it starts too early, I mean too too early. This a fan fiction and mc likes the original character but still he is going out with a girl at the age of 11. I mean what the fuck bro(talking to author)

A matured man liking a girl of 12yrs that's creepy bro not romantic, how much you love a character doesn't matter because because she is still a kid not even 14-15.

He took love intrest in a 5year old girl with 20 yrs old mentality. I think he is sick

Nice chapter, but i don't know when will it end though

Author what happened to "my hollywood system" novel again why no updates

Author don't you drop this novel it's pretty good

Hey author did you drop your first work "my hollywood system" why no updates for so many days???

It's like author dropped this one

Author why no updates for 5 days strate???

Ohh come on just kill June already

Brother please kill june in a car accident.

Why don't author just kill june in a accident if he don't want to develop her character.

Author if you make more sitcoms in the future please write "big bang theory" Please it's a wonderful sitcom.

Are you truly sick not faking it. You must have extra chapters in your patreon account so why not post those in here until you become good.

Author if you want you can make it paid novel but please stop with the"WHAT EVER IT'S JUST A FAN - FICTION ANYWAY "vibe You have written so well till now why are you writing nonsense now.

Yeah that waiter must be a world class killer to stab a knife to a big influencer with his body guard around. It's a bollywood cringe scene