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Comments of chapter undefined of My Hollywood System

Shadow_of_tears
Shadow_of_tearsLv2Shadow_of_tears

Thanks for the chapter

TypeVos
TypeVosLv2TypeVos

I think June is a cute character. Now that they aren't filming anymore, I can see the relationship working out.

Newnoob
NewnoobLv4Newnoob

I hope MC concentrates more on his career rather than love life. I can understand the romantic development, but don't make it rushed or else that would ruin it. Development should be slow so that we can better understand the characters as the story moves on. Hope it helps.

CILinkz
CILinkzLv2CILinkz

i dislike June so i hope she doesnt shackle the MC 26 chapters into the Novel already -.-

Lucifer_sama
Lucifer_samaLv3Lucifer_sama

Looks like it's about to go down in the next chapter. Good.....the atmosphere between them is already so sweet that I require doses of daily insulin.

50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv1450ShadesOfAss

imagine he dates June but she acts in a movie where she has to kiss other actors The Pain of dating an actress must suck

TehStorm
TehStormLv4TehStorm

...Please kiss her will...

Segsy_Deadpool
Segsy_DeadpoolLv4Segsy_Deadpool

This is YOUTH !

Starco
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April04
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Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

Actually in the original movie they spent well over 200k close to 400k.

Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3Trouxa_157

arrived bursting the mouth of the balloon, is already in the top 1 of the Ranking

Fakeuser_17
Fakeuser_17Lv3Fakeuser_17

So no double chapters for now???

KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

TheLittleGirl
TheLittleGirlLv13TheLittleGirl

Reading.

SladeOfWolf
SladeOfWolfLv4SladeOfWolf

Thanks

Pertiester
PertiesterLv7Pertiester

tx

Cyeven
CyevenLv14Cyeven

Thanks for the Chapter

Soulcrystal
SoulcrystalLv11Soulcrystal

Isn't that basically the same xD? So in the end the people went for 2 chapters a day. Normal novels here are about 1 - 1.2k words per chapter. Light Novel style demands higher word counts around 2.5 to 3k words and generally it is also accepted there that it can be filled with tons of info dumps. And analyzing your chapters, there are some parts where info overshafows the own flair and makes the chapters feel shirt or off. But keep it going :)

Cesar117
Cesar117Lv2Cesar117

Gracias por el capítulo. Te felicito por decidir hacer capítulos más largos en lugar de crear muchos capítulos cortos. Creo que es mejor así, ya que se pierde la inmersión en la historia si tienes que cambiar constantemente de página o pausar la lectura.