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Comments of chapter undefined of My Hollywood System

Aladin666
Aladin666Lv2Aladin666

the book is interesting and all... But your novel is becoming slow pace... It is just my opinion, but it would be better if make things more fast pace.

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MarkOfLife
MarkOfLifeLv5MarkOfLife

Slow pace is good when in main event like making movies. Fast pace when there is nothing important. ex. for Slow pace - Finding actors till the movie is Released. Fast pace - in other things unrelated to movies.

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mugi19
mugi19Lv14mugi19

Id honestly say if pace is ok otherwise you will miss some of the character and relationship building. if i had to say id just make slightly longer chapters than worrying about releasing more.

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TehStorm
TehStormLv4TehStorm

I am liking June, definitely liked her picture in the discord. I would 100% support the pairing.

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CopperHeart
CopperHeartLv5CopperHeart

Can author give me a picture of june and will. Plssss.

NiceGuy
NiceGuyLv12NiceGuy

I don't mind the pace or release schedule but make sure you don't drop or destroy the story by going into the wrong route against the plan.. it sometimes happens with authors. 🧐

Ecokane
EcokaneLv11Ecokane

Thx Autor-Sama

TC_Liyanage1
TC_Liyanage1Lv15TC_Liyanage1

❤️🙏 Thanks for the chap!

GamingRebels
GamingRebelsLv11GamingRebels

Small fix need in this chapter you said he brought intermediate level director skill, but he brought [Advance Level Direction] Type - Skill Cost - 40,000 Fame Points Chapter 11 it makes a huge difference for character development like the difference between and major league player and a minor league player! Just a heads up I know I'm late

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

FalseProphet_
FalseProphet_Lv14FalseProphet_

Do not speed your novel up, you can make your chapters longer but don't speed it up.

Xuefang1
Xuefang1Lv4Xuefang1

well I think 1 CHAP per day is sufficient but your chapter length is small as I just scroll down one time and it's finished so try to lengthen you chapters >.<

Dr_Absent_Minded
Dr_Absent_MindedLv13Dr_Absent_Minded

not the pace of your write actually just increase the time skip appearances

TyrTheFallen
TyrTheFallenLv12TyrTheFallen

Too bad we wont see known actors since it takes a little form the story to image all these new OC actors, at least if they ware actors we know by different name.

KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

al_tempt
al_temptLv13al_tempt

Slow pace are okay when start makeing movie... still love the chapter

ZCOOL_999
ZCOOL_999Lv4ZCOOL_999

Me encanta la historia la acabo de empezar a leer. Es muy refrescante y esta muy bien estructura. Las cosas son racionales y me gusta mucho el ritmo de actualizacion. La historia simpre me deja queriendo mas

TheLittleGirl
TheLittleGirlLv13TheLittleGirl

Reading.

LifelessMan
LifelessManLv5LifelessMan

Good Work

Shadow_of_tears
Shadow_of_tearsLv2Shadow_of_tears

Thanks for the chapter