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Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave

Jacob_Kendall
Jacob_KendallLv13Jacob_Kendall

Short chapter.. just saying

Jacob_Kendall
Jacob_KendallLv13Jacob_Kendall

Uh no. This novel definitely has some of the shortest chapters ever. I don’t know what novels your reading. It should be called pages not chapters.

Teddy_910:idk man if you read any other webnovels this chapter is about 3x as long, and much better written
VoidGhost
VoidGhostLv14VoidGhost

Things Sunless needs to look over. 1 his new powers. 2 the new memories he got for killing the hero golems and legacy items. 3 look over old memory's like that broken armor. 4 his aspects and attribute to have a more indef look at them

Goonyballs
GoonyballsLv15Goonyballs

so many cliffies ahhhhhhhh. loving your writing so much can't wait for more

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Geoffrery_Casey
Geoffrery_CaseyLv14Geoffrery_Casey

Yeah so I’ m going to need more chapters. Binged the first 300+ and it kills me to only get two a day. Love the story

VoidGhost
VoidGhostLv14VoidGhost

Let's hope with the new changes to Sunless body that he grow taller.

izayoi_nii
izayoi_niiLv14izayoi_nii

uhh why does he kept being interrupted lol this is the second time...first that soul conduit and now he suddenly wakes up

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The_fool
The_foolLv15The_fool

👍

DaoistFGfsmM
DaoistFGfsmMLv14DaoistFGfsmM

What's with the saturation of the soul core? What would happen if changing Star has her3 to Seven cores, how big of an improvement would she get in comparison to Sunny or would she loose that ability when she advances further, whereas sunny will get stronger improvement the further he advances in comparison to Nephis?

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Imprettystrange
ImprettystrangeLv15Imprettystrange

Thanks for the chapters!

VoidGhost
VoidGhostLv14VoidGhost

O God let's hope there is no hidden new flaw or it would be a logistical nightmare fore the author and Sunless.

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Dovaking
DovakingLv15Dovaking

thx

BlueVash
BlueVashLv14BlueVash

I believe I saw the author say somewhere that the user's flaw applies whenever any ability is used if it's activated, like Neph's. So, I think it's just the one flaw.

Timo_G
Timo_GLv15Timo_G

brutal cliffhangers. ..

fre20000
fre20000Lv15fre20000

Shouldn’t he get a second flaw after awakening the second aspect abiliyy?

Ian_Cudmore
Ian_CudmoreLv12Ian_Cudmore

what other languages does guiltythree speak, do we know?

Joshua_Candelario
Joshua_CandelarioLv13Joshua_Candelario

I forgot how do they progress in rank after the first awakening. Do they ascend in rank after training and killing after a while or do they have to go in another nightmare tobecome higher rank? I remember a thing about conquering first, second and so on nightmares but how does that work? A bunch of people in the same rank go in another thing like they were when they were sleepers? Is it compulsory or can you just stay in the same rank forever?

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0_214
0_214Lv30_214

thanks for the chapter!!

SovereignContrast
SovereignContrastLv3SovereignContrast

More chapterss

blackii55
blackii55Lv2blackii55

I thought there will be more chapters in the void ...Auther please summarize some chapters ..No need to stretch them

Anarchy0_0
Anarchy0_0Lv12Anarchy0_0

too many cliffs ( ・ั﹏・ั)