iIthink you should be writing these chapters, the AI has too much filler words, it was better in the beggining

maybe having seggs with her will open his eyes

nooooooo cliffhanger, love your story keep going

awesome is he gonna get another echo from this

he's not to that part of their 5 year stay yet

booboo that cliffhanger. love the story so far keep it up

1st

they are so polite because they are stronger beings now then regular people who are looking after their bodies

so many cliffies ahhhhhhhh. loving your writing so much can't wait for more

when can I join the game

I think it will be at most 50 people left at the end if not only the major characters

I'm suspicious of the blind girl

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

I love your story keep writing

do u have an editor for later chapters it's an awesome read so far but would make your story better with an editor

ooooo love not armor?

comma should go before yet not after

time for lyain to advance to expert candidate

I'm glad he's using bravo

isn't it already decided that they ARE going to win 2nd place