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I like the way it is going, just wondering if he will go primitive, undercover or something else. Purely create his own techniques like the ancestors or do something else. A nice progression would be Rui joining a research centre and becoming a researcher as a cover to advance his eso knowledge to further his martial path aside from training
Not Every Floor and its consequenses has to be described over multiple chapters as to mech time is spend on the dungeon, politics and plans instead of training, growth and fights which help him advance his martial art. Only one period of growth was really mentioned since they entered the dungeon and how he will use this enlightenment is still a mystery, which will stay that way unless the dungeon art is completed. Another 50 or 100 chapters i understand, but more would be too much even If it helps build the world. Skip and speed through certain floors and focus on some more significant events and not another 20 or 30 small ten chapter events and its consequences from multiple povs
Now another 6000 chapters until master at least
Ark larkinson is an excellent commander and a suitable expert/ace mech like the minerva but for davute based on a hive mind. The soldiers pilot mechs which are all connected battalions increasing cooperation and tactics like insect drones while remaining indepedant. Idea based on the twin souls in this chapter
Qilanxo in the house
Vulcan and The golden cat or Qilanxo