Guiltythree
Too descriptive. Leaves little room for the imagination to go wild, and Using too much words to describe something happening really fast isn't ideal. But it's really good.
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THAT'S A LARVA?!
That fight description was insane. Gj Author
great work đ
looking good so far but things are a little hard to imagine...
Make mc tall
"LARVA"
Hard to understand. A little too descriptive
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
nice chapter
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Well done..[img=recommend]
Yeah it is.. ..
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Good start!
good best one like it
what a fight, this should get Adaptation
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