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Your_Average_Guy

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  • Your_Average_Guy
    Your_Average_Guy11mth
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    Oh so he's actually forced to answer honestly... That's bad... Really bad.

    Ch 18 Absence of Light
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Your_Average_Guy
    Your_Average_Guy11mth
    Commented

    Easy Counters to the flaw would be; to Shut your mouth, Talk as vaguely as you can, or just train yourself to ignore questions all together. Yes he can't lie. But no one is forcing him to answer.

    Ch 17 Three Simple Words
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Your_Average_Guy
    Your_Average_Guy11mth
    Commented

    POOOOOOOOOOOOOG

    Ch 15 Shadow Slave
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    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Your_Average_Guy
    Your_Average_Guy11mth
    Commented

    That was CRAZY good. A really inspiring piece.

    Ch 14 Child of Shadows
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    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Your_Average_Guy
    Your_Average_Guy11mth
    Commented

    Oh the twist. I knew he had a plan.

    Ch 13 Moment of Truth
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Your_Average_Guy
    Your_Average_Guy11mth
    Commented

    It's insane how complex you can make a character seem like just by not revealing their POVs or their thoughts. Right now, Hero feels very deep. A character who's not too afraid of doing morally gray stuff. Makes him feel more human.

    Ch 12 The Smell of Blood
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Your_Average_Guy
    Your_Average_Guy11mth
    Commented

    Rip bozo

    Ch 10 First Man Down
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Your_Average_Guy
    Your_Average_Guy11mth
    Commented

    This is hype ngl. Also, the 'hero' soldier is a darksouls player character?

    Ch 6 Confronting the Tyrant
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Your_Average_Guy
    Your_Average_Guy11mth
    Commented

    Too descriptive. Leaves little room for the imagination to go wild, and Using too much words to describe something happening really fast isn't ideal. But it's really good.

    Ch 4 Mountain King
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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