Sue_D_Nymn
welcome back! If it's not too much to ask, could you make a character page? One for introduced characters and another for Ziggy's family/harem? About your authors note: tbh you should take a bit an play out scenes in your head for each to see which one fits the best. Something interesting though, you could have another team join Ziggy's familia. Small groups, using Fate characters as an example-- Oda, Kenshin and Mushashi or Artoria, Morgan Le Fay, Merlin/Proto Merlin and Modred. Could give a secondary focus group you could write about if Ziggy dialogue isn't working with you at times. These suggestions are just some food for thought. Take care! keep up the good work author!!!