Comments of chapter undefined of Son of Ajuka(DxD fanfic)

Son of Ajuka(DxD fanfic)

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music_pandaLv14music_panda

come on you could of let it go on hiatus for a bit with explaing then come back when you have inspiration. Sorry you got covid though hope you get better.

2yr

Ste1002Lv14Ste1002

would rather have this just be dropped over this ending

2yr

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Nidhin_VijayLv4Nidhin_Vijay

you could've just left it be.. this is a crime..

2yr

olympaforgedLv4olympaforged

a good ending would have been much better than this. man what a let down sorry about you getting covid.

2yr

electLv13elect

you could also have just written a small story of his life in the future and that the story was just him remembering his past and how he came this far would at least be far better than this

2yr

TheEvilDragon23Lv4TheEvilDragon23

Should have just said dropped instead.

2yr

GenzkLv4Genzk

You could have ended it with a good ending not this

2yr

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A_Stupid_StoryLv1A_Stupid_Story

The supreme one :-

2yr

Sephtis_AzraelLv5Sephtis_Azrael

...no words.....

2yr

Lust_IncarnatedLv3Lust_Incarnated

man im dissapointed with this ending, it couldve been a happy one and the story was beginning to be happy, but u dropped this ending, man it wouldve been better dropped.

2yr