Comments of chapter undefined of WHITE FEELINGS, BLACK HEART

story is very very very intriguing..this is the first time MC is a slave!!! However, if you install Grammarly on your browser, it will catch all the mistakes and help you make your writing better. And there are some conflicts in the storyline. The boy is not yet a slave, right? The voice is offering him. But the boy asks why he has become a slave to the voice, right? But he is being offered a slave contract the voice is seducing him...hahaha. So, revise the chapter, please.