Comments of chapter undefined of In This Corner Of The Multiverse

The guilt feels forced and like it came out of nowhere. There was no build up to it, but it was good idea to put character development, but then it also feels like he has gone through this stage multiple times already. I don't know. It just felt like it came out of left field.

The author seems to me that he makes careless mistakes. I thought he would not make such mistakes after the allergy of offrey.

really glad MC got a challenge thanks for the chapter

name of this arc; Jay kills the marvel Universe

it's nice that the mc has gotten an challenge

another thing. seeing how the bifrost is being an annoyance, couldn't Jay just make a giant portal and just move all of asgard into a micro verse as well. don't even need to push stuff in, just move the portal into the stuff. litteral planets and solar systems just Portaled away into a resource collector microverse.

an idea - couldn't he just portal all the energy attacks into a micro verse with an energy converter making a battery out of it

With all his smarts he's spreading himself too thin. He keeps getting distracted and making the same mistakes. This fight was very good, and he could easily revive Gamora, but I bet he won't cause too bothersome.

Thanks for the chapter

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amogus

Thanks for the chapter!

I liked it, have a good day