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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn2d
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    Essence of Blank

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    OrIgIn2d
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    Absolute Erasure

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    OrIgIn2d
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    Existence Manipulation

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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn7d
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    No.

    Carol X Pharaoh?????
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn11d
    Replied to Xellos1248

    No, this does not happen like this and that is not our thought process. If you wear dirty or worn out clothes, then you can expect to be judged as poor or some variation of that. Celebrities are certainly not like that either. Well, not all of them are like that. Just like not all people are good people. This level of racism and clasism is not so open, thought about, or even processed like that. What you WOULD find, is the classic making fun of an asian person's language, how they look, maybe assume they are a poorer class for the more racists bunch. But this level of racism is not mainstream or widespread. It is dramatized for the novel.

    In their minds, they had already subjectively assumed that Seth, like other ethnicities in America, was either a servant of the house or a thief who had taken over after the apocalypse.
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    Apocalypse - World Traverse System
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn12d
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    Diviiiiiiine Simp!

    Witnessing the girl he had pursued for three years in high school, four years in university, and two more years into work.
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    Taking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriend
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn20d
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    Waste chapter and annoying. Just get to the good stuff already. Filler

    Ch 136 Chapter 135: Triple S!
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    Marvel's Black Steel
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    OrIgIn1mth
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    Awesome story, however, thats not how it works... for Superman. Magic affects him as does any other normal mortal person. Meaning that Superman or even Kryptonians don't have any special weakness to magic that causes them to be more vulnerable to magic. It just affects them the same as any normal person. So, the strength this little girl has should not have any effect on Tut's skin, as his skin is near invulerable and the little girl only has 'little girl' strength. Now, if the hands and attacks of the little girl were somehow the enhanced with magic, then yeah awesome. Just a little pet peeve. Anyway, awesome story.

    As incredibly boring as it was, for several hours, we stayed like this: I would punch my fist through her head while she'd regenerate, and this cycle continued until the morning sun started to shine which the instant it did, the girl suddenly stopped being passive, and started aggressively attacking me. Unfortunately, since this girl was supernatural and probably had mystical abilities, I wasn't invulnerable to her attacks; luckily, though, she only had the strength of a little girl.
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn1mth
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    run-on sentence.

    The reason why he wanted Elena to know how to defend herself is so that she might be able to defend herself when he is never around in case something were to happen to her and who is the best person to teach her that other than Freya who has been honing her fighting skills over the years and creating different techniques and items to aid her so as to never be in a disadvantage whenever her magic fails her which she always says is unlikely going to happen.
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn1mth
    Replied to Maqets_1

    Maybe? Perhaps. But they would have to whole-heartedly believe that they are almighty. That's kind of hard to do when your own FATHER is the almighty. But then again it could just be one of those things where maybe they're not that powerful to achieve almighty status. So, I don't know. Maybe? Perhaps? Possibly?

    Seeing the species I got my nervous look curved into a wide smile, as, the wheel said "Archangel (Lucifer, Lucifer Show)" and "Immortal (TVD)" Looking back at God with the smile I couldn't help but ask "Don't the Archangels have specific abilities? Am I getting my own or one of theirs?"
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    Travels of the Daughter of God
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn1mth
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    carpet in a classroom? as the floor? heh

    The other people in this place I had identify as a classroom, I could see every detail on their faces: the crooked line of one's septum piercing and the flecks of gold in another student's hazel eyes. I was hyper aware of the smoothness and roughness of different textures around me: the scratchiness of the carpet under my rear and the coarseness of the wooden desk I fell out off.
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    As Satoru Gojo in the DC Universe
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn1mth
    Replied to OrIgIn

    Because Iphone apparantly has to official way to save the clipboard. But android is just holding as if to paste and justing clicking clipboard from the options that appear.

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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn1mth
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    Oh the phone. Android or Iphone?

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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn1mth
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    Cutting is taking the characters from the current place and keeping it in the clipboard. Its probably still in your clipboard: To get to your clipboard history at any time, press Windows logo key + V. From the clipboard history, you can paste and pin frequently used items by choosing an individual item from your clipboard menu. Pinning an item keeps it from being removed from the clipboard history to make room for new items.

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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn1mth
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    that isn't a spell. It's literally nature trying to correct for Amara's true immortality.

    Viktor: "Amara there is your ancestor and you all are her doppelgangers including our lovely Elena little Henrik is in love with. You are the first known doppelganger, Katerina here, is the second and Elena the third and also the last as we are breaking the spell that causes the doppelganger effect"
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn1mth
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    So you should've done it in much better way than this. Like seriously, "MC needs to tell these two because he has done something they can't explain and they believe MC is the devil or something and MC wants to clear that misunderstanding with just this." I don't know, to me, that just seems kind of forced. I can't think of a better way to write this necessity, at first I was like, "just make the duo already suspect MC is Adam", but then I was like, "Mc is like a ten thousand years old and he knows better than to give away himself to a bunch of literal children compared to him." And so I am stuck as to what advice I should give, I just feel like the situation felt kind of forced.

    There is a reason why they need to know the MC is Adam for later chapters.
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn1mth
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    You messed up that continuity real hard there. There were so many ways that you could have done this. Like, instead of just making Tut fly up by himself-which he wasn't doing last chapter-just make it so that he has to save them while also keeping Sara safe. More tension for the story. A story's lifeblood is the tension that arrives from conflict and it conflict itself. There is so little tension and the possibility for it in this novel already with the main character basically being Superman-level strong at 14, that you need to find the best ways to squeeze tension and conflict from other sources. Keeping Sara safe while also saving the F4 was a good place to insert tension and conflict. However, you decided to completely forget that Tut was bringing Sara into space in the last chapter and just retconned it to "somehow" make sense. Your story needs to have good internal consistency otherwise how will people trust you to tell a good story?

    Ch 71 Chapter 70: Cosmic Radiation Cloud
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn2mth
    Replied to ArtoriaPendragon_

    Immortals are completely and unconditionally and truely immortal. That's why Elena and Stefan exist, as a way for Silas and Amara to "die". They don't need blood to survive but they do need it to function. And ONLY function. They don't have any superhuman physical abilities and ONLY have their psychic powers. They are Immortal Psychics that need blood to function, but not survive. That's all. Without their psionics, they are normal human beings that can be "killed" by a gun. But then they would revive. Like instantly. They also heal basically instantly. Lucifer is also immortal, not like Silas and Amara as Lucifer can be killed, but he is an ANGEL. The strongest Angel.

    Lucifer had been a normal person in her past life, so she should have been freaked out about what just happened, but instead, she found the scent of the blood to be tantalizing, so, she dug her teeth into his slit throat and began to feed on his blood. The taste was like nothing she had ever had before and was truly delicious. 'No wonder Stefan was a ripper, this shit is delicious!' thought Lucifer, as she continued to drink the now-dead man's blood.
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn2mth
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    Did you know that the Angels from this Universe have a trait called Self-Actualization. Its described like this in the fandom wiki: For angels, it’s more prominent; since an angel's physical and spiritual being are one, how an Angel sees themselves will Self-Actualize on their physical body. This is why each Angel has a unique divine superpower that correlates to their personality, and why angels cannot impregnate mortals unless they can see that mortal as the parent of their child. This trait can be a powerful strength or a crippling weakness, depending on how the Angel sees themselves.

    Seeing the species I got my nervous look curved into a wide smile, as, the wheel said "Archangel (Lucifer, Lucifer Show)" and "Immortal (TVD)" Looking back at God with the smile I couldn't help but ask "Don't the Archangels have specific abilities? Am I getting my own or one of theirs?"
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  • OrIgIn
    OrIgIn2mth
    Replied to Cultured_Daoist

    No we haven't. No other manhua or manhwa or novel that I've ever read about cultivation go into into much details about the workings of cultivation and the other stuff related. It's just that I wish it was presented better, thats all. I also don't know how you could present it better, I aint that experienced with writing.

    "Haa, Elif, physiques are similar to spirit roots as both are categorized using the same ranks, although physiques don't have a Mortal rank. The easiest way to understand physiques would be to think of them as an accessory; you don't need to have a unique physique in order to cultivate, but having one will enhance your cultivation in one way or another, whether it's your cultivating speed, your strength, your affinity towards a weapon, or if you're lucky all of the above. That is just the basic understanding of physiques, but I'm sure you get the idea, Elif." Explained Marcus, who was no longer feeling down by the end of the speech.
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