Comments of chapter undefined of In This Corner Of The Multiverse

Jay's attempt to revive Offee being ruined by his future self is like:

The chapter felt... strange? you can see it in the places you pasted from the previous chapter to build up this one. A sort of disconnect between the emotions. One moment he's drunk the next he's having a conversation. He sees the overlap between Offee and Paige but never questions if he's misplacing his feelings. His anger with her just stops on the spot and when she mentions 'don't ruin this moment by talking about your dead wife' its a major red flag. If anything I feel like this 'fight' ended really tamely and feels like they went from a heated fight to a sudden goodbye and touching moment.

My theory: the MC wouldn't be able to revive Offe through his own fault, as I imagined that "engine/machine" he created to "reset/clean" the force of the entire galaxy, the one the mc made so that none could copy his technology, with the help of the gallows (I think he did this right after getting rid of the Force Gods). just think, Offe dies, becomes a spirit (because she joined the force) then she is destroyed while the force is being cleaned (all force spirits, not just her) then the MC can't revive her because the spirit already ceased to exist. so he had to go back in time when she was still alive to take her soul, to revive her. Crazy theory, but in my head it makes perfect sense.

I found the ending a little sad, if he's not coming back it's better to make it very clear, it seems he left things a little open, as if she had hope, of course with time MAYBE she'll get over it, but imagine she'll spend the rest of your life waiting for him to come back and he never comes... would that be too sad? deplorable? not what word to use. and, I hate that kind of "let's take a break" at the end of a relationship, I personally prefer it when things are very clear, they talk, fight, argue, but in the end, they understand each other and they are at peace at the end of the relationship. relationship, maybe even friendship... or not.

This version seems more like something the MC would do

Now that I’m seeing it, I realize the perfect end for me regarding this Saga would’ve been: 1. Him failing to save Offee and ACCEPTING she’s dead. for good. 2. reject Paige, but in a relatively mature way for a good reason. 3. Only have a romantic partner once he’s strong enough to adventure the multiverse without risk. aka the epilogue of the story.

I would say keep this version although you might want to fix the transition of the chapter as there is a feeling of copy and paste from the previous chapter. although from the dialog of Paige I think I can see you trying to create a yandere personality. I see the hints and clues.

Definitely liked version 2 over 1.I'll

İ like this chapter more compared to vers. 1

Also, I thought his daughter was actually alive according to his future self? This made it sound like she was just as mentally dead as her mother.

I like she's one

I prefer this over the first version but it feels a bit weird in the transition. Also I feel like Paige is gonna try (fail) to invent some multiverse travel to visit the MC

version 1

This one is pretty good actually.

So, it's been a year...which compromise is the final, cannon compromise?

Its not his wife. But a cloned body double aka no soul no life faked life like by future Jay walker

if it was a soul problem can't he go to naruto transplant a rinnegan then use outer path?

yeah this one just doesn't feel right I prefer the first version

This is the best chapter of the two, as a no harem lover.