Comments of chapter undefined of In This Corner Of The Multiverse
In This Corner Of The Multiverse
GoldFinger
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see,I have problem which I get too deep in characters and that I got my heart beat fast for the thing I hate to happen like,I would really like to jump in to next universe but then I think I lose the development he gets in this star wars(no matter how bad its to me I can't skip arcs)so I rather drop the story than continue with the skipping the bad parts(to me so don't take wrong)I was thinking that she would clone him or something close,do you remember where he teaches her to memory copy device and she was so interested and he teaches to her how it is work then I thought when she got vision's of future she was going to make clone of him when she thought he would die(she belive force too much) then maybe MC take this clone as betrayal then 𤯠no cringe love story.Other reason why I didn't like this alien girl is that she don't look appealing to me like bro you are normal human before multiverse travel and this second world so its too early to start liking alian girls. and rather than forced like I would like to see when the day she come to him to have sex with MC(she loses faith in Jedis)then he feel guilty about what he did to her(her master or whatever died)so he comfort her(there no love in this)with se* then in the morning she apologize(like start using her brain over emotions) and over there is no need to love MC like yandere or MC suddenly loves her.(this about my rant, you don't need to think too much.
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this novel took a massive turn for the worse, it was decent, but when you introduce the timeline thing and all this, it just became WAYYYY too confusing, especially when you tell that we aren't supposed to read the future version chapters as they are spoilers but they also contain important details for the present. I'm dropping this novel. Plus the Offee relationship is cringe af.
Dear author, enjoying the story thus far, just got done binge reading. A little annoyed at the "love sacrifice for character growth" but otherwise its been entertaining. I had some time to burn and tried my hand at whipping up some cover arts to go with the story, in case you're interested. Use or discard at your leisure. Cover 1: Uses the current one but with a title added and with as tweak to the portal color to fit more with the theme since Rick's portal tech is green.
