"Wisdom has been chasing you, but somehow you are faster." -
the way he does things like what your synopsis has said, it really isn't adding up Using the full potential of the fruit and all.his made of fire now he could probably fly from all I know, yet he almost died from a mare sea king. and the way he just overall reacting with his environment like forgetting about sea kings existing a moment before one almost killed em, like if you get the fire fruit you'd mostly use it freely and explore it immediately but just gloss over it, you need to show him "actively" propelling his fruit to improve not just put it in the back burner, and dont make the mistakes of most authors on "Telling not showing" show us how he improves on using his fruit.
oh is that a dota reference?
Character development my arss, you just wanna make the story unnecessarily long, I'm kinda disappointed with this story.
he is still a sisi I see
Cry about it bozo
you are the moron here, he is in the shinobi world if he doesn't wanna go kill people just kill himself and hopefully he gets reincarnated in a safer world. now the reason he wont do that is he a pissi pissi MC that's too emotional for the shinobi world, ye I know he has morals so what? it's be killed or kill there anyways.
but you dont show him doing the training, you just gloss over it.
is so important for his character dev? if not just gloss over it.
You just to stupid to see it
sheesh talk about hero complex, are you related to emiya per chance?
and you keep doing it, to annoy us.
yeah, it keeps happening and it's not funny anymore.
Why even bother putting a warning? this is the ninja world, killing is pretty much synonymous with.