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In my opinion every story needs 5 L’s to become great, or at least better than without them. They’re what you should experience while enjoying the story. You should Laugh, Lament, Loathe, Love, Lust
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Thanks for the chapter Author, but could you start adding some more details to the lemons? By details I mean foreplay. Like she blows him or he eats her out or 69 or something other than whatever vanilla lemons I’ve read so far. Just asking because details matter, makes it all more enjoyable.
*Critique not critic.
Echidna!!!! Yaaaasssss! Lol
7 Billion? Seriously? Author are you even aware of how much space would be required to house that many?
I love it!!! I’ve got Chills man!…… … .. . Arise
Absolutely right. Never enough.
The only Sage I like….
The only one that matters.