MonkWithAPen
To The Author, All in All - Very good FanFic with great potential but as fan a small suggestion take it or leave it- * Make MC[An ANTIHERO TYPE TOTAL GREY CHRACTER with HIGH IQ(SUPERCOMPUTER FAST OR FASTER) balance the Himself/World with GREY(MIX OF BLACK AND WHITE) and making the MC- all knowing character type but still learns with humble manner. * Make MC - Jack Of All Trades & The Master of All Things like Best in Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, all Weaponary Arts,Bukijutsu,Genjutsu,Barrier Ninjutsu,Chakra and Nature energy Absorption Techniques, Clone Techniques,Cooperation Ninjutsu,Fuinjutsu(Sealing but make with combination of Seal,Coding and Runes), Juinjutsu as well as Jujutsu, Kinjutsu,Medical Ninjutsu, NinshĆ«, Nintaijutsu, Regeneration Techniques,Reincarnation Ninjutsu, Shurikenjutsu, SpaceâTime Ninjutsu,Dojutsu,Kekkei Genkai, Kekkei tota, Kekkei Mora, Senjutsu(MC making the jutsu combine all sage modes - Nature Energy+Chakra+Mana+Kekkei Genkai+Kekkei tota+ Kekkei Mora+Dojutsu+SpaceâTime element+Eight Gates/Taijutsu+Fuinjutsu elements making a more powerful jutsu also in the process making him NIGH-IMMORTAL but without any marks/tattos apperance only feels it like chakra in their body but this remains permanent - a technique without side effects but a very hard to master it several harder than Eight Gates but this technique upgrade is endless levels which can be learned by anyone), Science(Medicine, Smith, Engineer, Researcher). *MC preserve/saves nature of it's planet making the Nature, Chakra, Mana energies combined, making the energy richer in the planet also teaches people about this this and creating new Science, Technology development and Techniques/Jutsus(Same but instead of chakra now use this new found energy) without harming Planet's nature. Hope to see these improvements as a fan of FanFic. Thanks- Reader.