Unholy_Angel
if you make it star wars can you still make it multiverse because it was going to be cool seeing him go around universes to fight strong monsters. if you can please keep him that nice guy while also having kill when necessary. I always hated when authors made their mc's psycho path that only want to kill . It just ruins the story.
if you are going to rewrite it don't add the system personally i don't see it going well with a prota yautja and this a bit op since no matter what you do people will see you as talented in that all it needs to be the best and most powerful is time and not much, a power like that doesn't go with a yautja if you saw the predator 2018 even if many people didn't like it it implies that they don't like to get stronger by the easy way, they have the technology to improve themselves and be superior to what they were a few days ago but those who follow the yautja tradition don't accept this they don't see it honorable. if later during his adventures he gets other powers or his parents are special is another thing, this is what I personally think.