No offense to author but what the fuck is happing in this story half the time. I'm only at chapter ten, and i am confused as shit on what's happen. can you either make it more simple or do recap chapters to explain because i am confused.
can you still write the first one to even know it didn't have many chapters i really like the character and the start of the story. plus this second story just isn't my cup of tea. I much prefer the first story.