Zeckyll11
well author it's time you bring some blood in the novel like when lex threw azmuth and Gwen they hit the wall and Gwen hit the wall several times at least she would be injured somehow like some blood coming from her mouth or some brushes đ the way you write makes it look like a child story well everythings good and going but now we are all not the children we used to be đ so make it seem like itt real add injures that are displayed don't spoil it like it's a cartoon [img=recommend] your doing great just need some updates thanks for the chapter