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Comments of chapter undefined of The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)

Qeryn4195
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So the mc arrives like a hero and saves the damsel in distress and she ends up taking a liking to him... kind of generic I would say. It would be better if she ended up dying, the mc arrives later and kills/captures them for information

Fausto_Neto
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It would be even worse if she died, if she died, the mc would only get information, what is this chapter for? the last chapter and this one were her character introduction, if she dies it will be 2 useless chapters.

Lunarian_King
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I already see Val as a carbon copy of Lagertha, and now you bring Lagertha to GoT/ASOIAF. will they become siblings? like sisters? perhaps a twin?

Brezer
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so is this whole lead up a way to force a female companion on the readers? he just came to a new world he doesn't need a woman.

GawkGawk
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garbage cliche chapter try harder next chapter please

Bob_Uchiha_XD
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The damsel in distress is a classic theme in art, literature, film, and video games around the world. She is usually a beautiful, nubile young woman put in dire straits by a villain or monster and in need of a hero to come to her rescue. He has become a type character, particularly in melodramas. It is an efficient old and simple strategy. ~~~ Pic: Katheryn Winnick

He_he_he5000
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Author i hope you will let MC keep his secret of him having a system or cheats from his women, harem or from anyone close to him (Please) And thanks for the chapter👍

ali_seifi
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Thanks for the chapter â˜ș I'm eagerly waiting for MC to arrive like a hero and save the damsel in need XD

MagicSand
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Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

JIM_MoriOg
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Thanks for chapter

Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

Badnaam
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moreeeeeeeeeee

ZaP_Tempest
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thank you for the chapter and have my power stone!

Hobo_Hank
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Ty

foreign_beyonder
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thanks for the chapter

Dakeyras41
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Thanks for the chappy

5paghetti_5auce
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thanks for the chapter

kirito024
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Thanks for the chapter~

AngelDdy11111
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Please keep writing thanks for the chapterđŸ™đŸ™đŸ«Ą

Jin_Kazaragi
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Merci pour le chapitre !

DaoistzuVmua
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Thanks for the chapter

Shanky_S
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thanks for the chapter