Comments of chapter undefined of The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)

You are dragging this for too long. It's multiverse fanfic if I am not wrong. Just skip few useless ones and do the information and the action stuff only time to time for the filers. That way u will be able to skip the lame parts and be with it. Ik u r bored with it too like the other fanfic writers, a lot of them quit bcs of the boring part. So yeah [img=recommend][img=exp]

Another useless filler chapter.

staying with this group is brain suicide

I know this is a slow paced fic, and I like slow pace myself. but you're dragging this too much. you'd reach chapter 100 before reaching Hershel farm at this pace, y'know that you don't need to describe everything or write every single conversation they have, you could just mention the content of thos and skip the boring details that are not important. the whole conversation about voting could be summarized in "after all the talks are done, it was decided we will be heading to CDC. Morales and his family didn't come with us. they decided to head '...' to rejoin their people." instead of the long conversation and details about a subject like that. ppl will start saying that you're stretching it, so only write important details or conversations cuz most readers hate filler chapters especially if there were many of them in row. as always thank you for the chapter, and I'll always be looking forward for the future ones.

go into the CDC and loot everything all the meds and food he can put in his inventory.

why is he even trying to stay with the show group....what real reason would he have to get dragged along through all their drama when he basically already has an outline of the future.....like why not just ditch the dead weight and go right to hershals or w/e. seems so forced.

thinking better to survive in the governor's style and the best option, my opinion would be to go to the governor's city and try to administer it and then take power.

Thanks for the chapter it was short very short author

Thx for the chapter

Buenos capitulo

But, still thank you for the chapter, and you should not write everything in the story your dragging it too much

I thank you for the chapter.

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter, I'm kind of getting stressed out , feeling that a major change(perhaps) to plot line is coming up

thanks

thanks for the chapter