Comments of chapter undefined of My Upgrades Are Invincible Old/Betrayed/Forgotten/Dead

I dunno about this....while cucking bell felt intriguing to me, the way the lemon happened feels forced. It would've been much better if hestia slowly fell in love with mc and agreed sleeping with him while sober.

I hope this story doesn't turn into a harem.. it always ruins the story when that happens. harem stories always stops being about the MC and his adventure and turns into a story of the girls and their interaction with MC.. MC should be loyal and not a mansloot..

for people keeping track of the timeline welp Bell is having a VERY eventful day in the dungeon alone

Dont get me wrong, I enjoyed the Lemon and Hestia being in the harem, but how did this happen? At the end of the last chapter they were drinking the concoction they made and sll of a sudden they were in the Lemon. I dont know how they got there and its kind of ruining my immersion, just SomEthing to think about

this seems so forced

Speechless... at how early this is, so kinda zzz on my impression. Meh, this is fanfic so.

thanks for the GOLD! I'm doubly pleasantly surprised, one because I didn't expect you to put Hestia in the harem, which made me happy, and secondly because you made lemon!

Agreed with the other comments. Nice development, Hestia is the best, but this was way rushed. No feels or suspense out of it at all.

too forced and too soon

way too fast. such a shame.

harem

10 girle would be enough in harem and make him immortal so he doesn't die of old age

Exp

So forced

meh. too forced

Good

isso foi de 0 a 10 muito rapido

Thanks for the chapter