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Comments of chapter undefined of In The Shadow of Erebor

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In The Shadow of Erebor

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Sandford_96
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Too many pov switches to actually get into the story without being confused about whats going on and whats happening.

2yr
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Chapter 6 has only one POV, that of Earendil, Do you mean the flashback causes confusion, or is it the story in general (which does change POV each chapter), that's causing you to lose focus?

2yr
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