Comments of chapter undefined of One Last System

i see alot of that improvement from the multiverse novel. the grammar and prose right out of the gate is leagues better. the improvement is tangible. good hook too.

Thanks for the chapter!

nice start😁

Doesn't this sound like a nightmare🤣 waking up to a test you weren't prepared for?

This is honestly one of the best opening chapters I’ve ever had the pleasure of reading in a webnovel. Really looking forward to the story now

He accepts thing too quickly…Kinda weird

Thx for chapter

This one of the best opening chapters I've read👍🏽💯

Finally a good start I read

Great into 👍🏾

Interesting start [img=faceslap]

Thanks for the chapter 💖

I'm confused... why does everybody hate him?

thx

I'm so confused tho lol

Espera spy el unico que no entendio el 1 capitulo :0

Lets see

👍

great openings

interesting