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SaysMe1mthReplied to Ashe_NexusThe warm water flowed through the fur, skimming the skin. The warmth seemed to surge like electric currents—soothing the Flame Fox bathing in it. The creature closed its big seductive eyes and relaxed its tight body, letting out a weak and melodious moan.- SaysMe1mthReplied to qtDog[Turn on the picture function for a full reading experience. Please upgrade your Qidian Reading APP to the latest version.]
- SaysMe1mthReplied to Zach_PaulsCh 261 Chapter 124: 【Evolution Concept】! It can't be you, little fellow, who gives me the benefits of the locust army... _2
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How exactly would anyone come to either conclusion?? It’s just written as [Lady]…..
[Note]: This Lady is Judy Hime, not Earth Lady Quinna. - SaysMe2mthCommented
He has foresight, just burn one to see if she would actually tell him after he releases her. He then gets the info for free
[You and Great Princess reach a stalemate. You don't plan to release her, and she doesn't plan to tell you anything.] - SaysMe2mthCommented
Took me a second lol
[Log]: Through the Heroic Spirit Transformation Divine Art, since the Heroic Spirit Realm has no autonomous will and Goblin Hero Spirits are the mainstream, you gained 37.84% of the authority over the Heroic Spirit Realm after the death of the Ancient King of Ni! - SaysMe2mthReplied to Noah_w123Ch 71 Chapter 56: The rules we recognize are the rules!
- SaysMe2mthReplied to Ronan_McCrossan
Yeah MC is the hostile invader, along with all the blue star players. He’s sympathizing with the Mech people as basically Blue Star players invaded their backyard, then sent their elder to beat them up and allow it to continue via a “friendly consultation” lol
For example, it's as absurd as "a person growing up and inheriting the family business, only for a group of brats to try to steal it. After he kills one, the brat's elders come and reason with him, making him realize his mistake. Not only does he have to bring the brat back to life and apologize, but he also has to acknowledge his mistakes and decide to compete in a gentle and good-natured manner for his family business with outsiders." - SaysMe3mthReplied to Timelord2Ch 729 Viral Infection (2)
- SaysMe3mthReplied to SAODarkness_90
Lol Laolao is maternal grandma in mandarin so I’m guessing it was translated
"Now it's time to check the Grandmother Temple." - SaysMe3mthCommentedSu Nan looked at the dagger in his hand, his heart wavering with temptation.
- SaysMe4mthPosted
About 80 chapters in. The erotic writing part is terrible and bleeds out into other chapters, don’t mind erotic scenes when I read but it was just bad. Story pacing is rather slow, and everyone is an idiot but the MC, who is very much a Mary Sue. The grammer is better then most stories on here though, and the world background seems well thought out.
- SaysMe4mthCommentedPossessing a pear-shaped body, Cambyses had a slender torso with modest breasts but wide hips and a huge, jiggling ass, sculpted by the gods.
- SaysMe4mthReplied to acejoker_661
Bruh that’s my height and 10lbs from my weight, far from a scarecrow. Not stacked but muscular and lithe. Specially since dude is a soldier
It had to be said Alexander was no lightweight himself. Standing at 180cm and weighing 80kgs, he could take on almost anyone. - SaysMe4mthReplied to Cole_Kincaid
Who knows what Ronan used to hydrate the clay…..
" Don't even mention those mediocre female subjects. Ronan couldn't even fathom the creation of high-level wisdom, and the constructs he created were all trash. I really wonder how he created me back then. Maybe he lied. I'm not his biological son at all!" - SaysMe4mthReplied to RainOfStarlight
LN?
They were really poor! - SaysMe4mthCommented
She flew out of his eyes??
A thumb-sized elf with wings on her back flew out of the white light. - SaysMe4mthPosted
The story is great and the MC is very entertaining. Good action and lots of laughs so no complaints there. Unfortunately about halfway through the translation quality really takes a nose dive, and you have to start applying a lot of guesswork to figure out what is being said. Not just the common he/she mix up but also completely missing grammer or words from sentences. Updates are pretty normally usually, though there are always several days where nothing gets released.
- SaysMe4mthPosted
Writing at the start is rough , really rough. Stuck through it as there are edits here and there that hint at better writing to come. What killed it for me though was the character progression. Just jumps all over thr place and really killed the enjoyment for me. I really wanted to like this book as the premise seems great but the execution really doesn’t make this worth reading. And certainly not worth using stones on.