Comments of chapter undefined of Avatar: Awakened Gamer
Avatar: Awakened Gamer
HolyJoker
Chapter comments94
I think this is the 4th of your books that I read, and, for the first time you have such good and OP ability from the start like the Gamer to play and write about, but you just have to go and mix it with Chat, Gatcha and Random cringe political speeches. I mean, practically all your MCs at one point or another have some kind of rant and go on and on abut this and that and why humans are this and why they should do that, but this is the first time I cringed so hard tbh. The only good thing that came out of this is that probably he will stop pumping luck and get some other stat to 100. Still, in my opinion it would have been way better if you just stuck with the Gamer gimmick, focus on physical stats and cut out other worlds and random elements. Probably a pointless argument since you usually already have advanced chapters on p.treon, but I just had to get it off my chest regardless.
I find the MCS relationship with Kattara creepy and delusional; he just met a rando, and actually believed her to be his sister, she's Sokkas sister not the mcs, as not in not his sister in anyway that matters, and the soldiers redemption scene was awful, one of a:tlas great points was how it skillfully showed the character's personalities, even with side and minor chacaters even "the bad guys", you the author failed to replicate that, your writing skill is below average, your characters are just 1 dimensional personality traits of the originals, ...but it's fine since the appeal in his stories is the mcs journey, as his manipulates and uses everything to further is own goals so when the author stirs away from the core of whats enjoyable about his stories, what you're left with is a bad and hollow fanfic. just my oponion.
College, huh? I remember going to my good old campus like it was yesterday even though it's been 37 years. Hmph. I was the top student acing all my class as if it was child's play. Didn't realize I was on a sigma grindset back then ignoring the fan girls blocking my path. Yeah, fan girls. Being superidol-handsome was a pain.
